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Legend of Zelda: The Tears of Shadows Chapter 2I woke up, not knowing if it was day or night or how much time, or anything besides my name about myself. But my sense of smell was back, even though it was calming, it was also scary. I could also move a little, not much, if I did too much, my body would probably hurt even more. I waited a long time, this time it was probably night. Then I felt movements and smelled something nice, then the movements ran out. A while later it came back with cuckoo soup. Once again it fed me, being able to smell the sweet smell of the person I felt that I could relax. This person seemed nice, and made a good soup. I sometimes felt breath in my face, as if the person was talking, but I couldn't hear, see or answer, but I hoped to be able to one of them soon. I could barely move, but wanted somehow to communicate. I felt movement, as if the person wanted to leave, as if a reflects I tried to grab her or him. The person sat down again and lifted my right hand, it felt like a girl's. Then she began to draw
Legend of Zelda: The Tears of Shadows Chapter 1Feelings and tasteI woke up wide open eyes, I had a nightmare I no longer can remember. It was dark and comfy... huh? Comfy? I had just been... I stopped. Was it really night? I couldn't see anything! But I felt a breeze, a cold breeze. And pain, lots of pain... suddenly the air changed a little, my reflects told me to jump away, but the body couldn't follow. I felt breathing in my face, someone was there. Who?! Hands touching me, breathing turning away, scared, might get killed, must get away! Huh..? The, person? Moved away, safe, or more danger? Gotta get away before they come back for the kill! Steps again! Can feel them, but not hear them! Voice wont come out! The being sits down, next to me! Probably to move in for the kill! Can feel the air change as they move their arm! Scared! It's coming closer.Gwuh! Huh? A wooden spoon? With cuckoo soup? Spoon is taken out, in again with new soup. It's good... Ah... I feel sleepy...